All Comments on 'Come Love Me'

Short but entertaining. Looking forward to your next submission. Thanks for sharing.

where is the first part?we come in while they are fighting with no reference as to who they are or why they are fighting other then they are mom and son.

I think that your approach of starting well after the conflict began was a very good touch. Too often a story is overly long and the characters, with too much detail into their inner selves, become so unique as to become unrelatable. Here we were able to imagine the details leading up to the narrative. Although I decline to disparage lenghty stories (in fact, most are quite good), I believe your method here was spot on. I hope to read more from you.

Yes. Brief and explicit. Do try other themes and more stories.

way too dramatic. This ain't romeo and juliet where romeo talks more in the sex instead of getting his dick in juliet's ass

I...I really don't know what to make of this. It has all the ingredients that should make me love this, but yet, something is missing.

This is a very unique story, and kudos on writing this, and managing to stick within one page. I'm going to hold off on rating this until I read it again after a bit, but it was VERY interesting. Thanks for the submission.

Maybe a bit short, but I loved the power game and drama.

I left after the 2nd "paragraph". Using too many "big" words in one sentence is so unrealistic. Trying too hard

Great little story love the concept