All Comments on 'Comfort Food'

"Several lonely nights had ended with him laying in the dark"

What was he laying? Eggs?

The word you want is "lying".

really?

You've got ONE submission from 2001, and you're blowing off this submission because of 'laying' vs 'lying'.

Have you, "kaf", volunteered to be an editor -- or are you just a lurker that snarks against minutiae.

You have NOT given CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, so really, GO AWAY [I think that's a better way to say 'FUCK OFF'].

Many Asian women act shy and innocent. Catching one at the right time is wonderful, they let loose and are very sexy.

suggest a sequel where he fucks her ass and she does ass-to-mouth

Thoroughly enjoyed it

I can tell these two are so compatible! I hope they have many more adventures together :-)