All Comments on 'Comfort Zone'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
The slow start belies the action at the end

The first part of the story appears slow but the reader realizes that the character is being set once they get further into the text....

poodlegirl69poodlegirl69almost 19 years ago
submissive reality

from another submissive this story is very exciting and arousing. i understood completely the beautiful feelings and arousing thoughts of commitment to your task. very well done and thank you for such a beautiful piece.

lilsubalexlilsubalexalmost 19 years ago
Right up until the end...

Hi:

I very much enjoyed the story, right up until the very end. I have never been a fan of the "dream ending" - it seems to be a way of saying, "I was just kidding" or "I don't want to offend anyone"

Other than that.... I really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Love this...

"Enslave the mind, and the body will follow." Indeed.

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