by My English rose
The first part of the story appears slow but the reader realizes that the character is being set once they get further into the text....
from another submissive this story is very exciting and arousing. i understood completely the beautiful feelings and arousing thoughts of commitment to your task. very well done and thank you for such a beautiful piece.
Hi:
I very much enjoyed the story, right up until the very end. I have never been a fan of the "dream ending" - it seems to be a way of saying, "I was just kidding" or "I don't want to offend anyone"
Other than that.... I really enjoyed it.