All Comments on 'Comforting Mom'

Thank you for another memorable story. Any plans to continue this one since you've already given us hints of other females Hannah has bedded? Whatever you decide, your writing is a great turn-on, and I hope you keep doing it for a long time.

That was so very well crafted and so hot that my screen started to steam. You had the pace perfect. Thank you. There is room for some wonderful new chapters that explore how Margaret discovers her new life. Well done indeed. G

This was sensual, romantic, kinky and hopefully the winner of this year's Valentine's contest :)

Part 2 could be introducing Amanda into a threesome with her mom

Maybe Part 3 could be Ms Wilson calling Hannah's mother in on the pretence of discussing Hannah's grades during her prep period and disciplining her over her desk with a little help from Hannah.

Didn't really care for the story, but I couldn't help noticing your use of "nodded" as a speech tag. It's not. It's an action. You can't use it like so. "I do," she nodded. You can however use it correctly : "I do," she said, nodding.

This was one of your best in a while, right up until page three. Nice pace. Slow seduction. None of your unrealistic dialogue. Then, on page three, you caved. The whole 'mommy slut', 'live in mommy pet', and such. I can't imagine this being realistic. Perhaps, just maybe, in a bdsm setting. But even then only rarely and certainly not on an initial seduction. Still, better than most stories here, and the first two pages were glimpses of the talent we all know you possess. All hail SSL, the once and hopefully future queen of Literotica.

TimTam

Honestly I was enjoying the slow build up, then page three hits and you go back to everyone is a slut. I was hoping for that slow burn that brought the true slut out of the mother. I still gave it five stars but I have been hoping for that slow build of the mom's journey into slut instead of jumping in feet first.

A real gem.I wish there was more mommy/daughter incest stories. My personal favorite

I enjoyed the story, although as several others have stated it went from a fairly slow build-up (which I absolutely loved) to the whole "mommy slut" thing almost instantly. Still, lots of great content.

You seem to have a passion with the Dommie/sub thing. Is good as long as it is your fantasy. Let the Neigh Sayers read something else if they don't like it. I would like to see a sweet romantic seduction some times though.

Still consider you the best of the best in Lit.

i enjoyed the story while watching a mature/teen girl video, well written, much better on the backstory than typical. write a story about seducing the neighbor. then mom and the neighbor. then mom and amanda. then amanda's mom. then a girl party. invite all the friends

As always, you put a totally erotic story onto paper. I absolutely love your writing.

I loved this hot,kinky,taboo story!!! I imagined myself and my mother and came twice. Enjoyed the build up as well as the climax and ending. Looking forward to more of your stories

Ah, you have a wondrously wicked mind and once again have produced a hot story that lives for me as a reader, and leaves me just beginning to wonder what i missed out on.....

This is one of the best stories I have ever read on literotica and it certainly has a great opening and it felt like a proper seduction slowly but surely getting mommy to lesbianism. When it came to the mommy slut bit I had to take a break or I would have exploded. Thank you Jasmine for such a naughty story.

I loved it. Great story! The only way that it could have been hotter is if you had illustrated it! Five stars!!

A very sexy and erotic story with a wonderful seduction. This story would have been even more amazing if it was one of your illustrated stories.

Enjoyed it immensely! I'm a typical guy in that the thought of being a voyeur as two women play together is exciting! And your writing does that! You include all the details that bring me into the room with Hannah and Margaret during their encounter. Fabulous! But I am also a somewhat atypical fellow because the idea of being able to suck the toes of these ladies is the cherry on top of this lesbian sundae! Beautiful! Rated 5 stars only because they won't let me give it more. Thanks!

This is the beat thing I've ever read

Great story

Id love to be in a chair in the corner watching you two taking notes..

I hope this is not the only story between mother and daughter and you include plenty of other ladies in their bed.

Great story even though I am male and Gay, loved it all.

Love your stories.

Jasmine, I'm privileged to know how much thought and care you put into all your stories, including this one. You have a hot, vivid imagination, on occasion a wicked sense of humor, continually come up with surprising new story lines, and it's no surprise you're the highest rated author on Literotica.

This may be an obvious point, but none of the readers who use this space to slam you can remotely do what you do. They probably put other people down habitually, then wonder why they don't receive any compliments themselves.

The consistent high quality of your stories puts them into an entirely different category.

The only frustrating part is Literotica only has a five star rating. To unapologetically borrow a Spinal Tap reference: your stories go to 11!!!

As always magnificent. I just love Silk stocking is the turn on!!!!!!!!!!!love your stories thank you!!!!!!!!!!

I wholly agree with Tex. Nuff said!!!

Accidentally hit 1 star while scrolling. Wish they had an option to change it, I would of gave it 5.

Sensual and loving! As a male, I want these women as friends and lovers.

The further it went the less it mattered

It was a fun read

Thanks

I loved the story and easy to add to

Well Jasmine what a truly great story as usual. You have a really great talent at writing your stories which are always enjoyed. Keep the great work

I loved the story! Another great one, but i would really like it if you would return to the Family Affair series. So many people are looking for part three and it has been two years almost! But overall great story

Lot of readers object to dirty talking and ironically they talk about not being realistic. I respect their opinions. However, as to my commen, do they even realize that incest itself seldom happens at least willingly? 90% of the incest is male family members raping their girls in the real world.

Given that, what we read is here not realistic but a fantasy world where anything is possible. Writers like take us to that fantasy world and enjoy. I always cherish your stories. You build slowly with romance/caring elements and then explode with intense sex and dirty like a deserving climax. It is a great mix of hot and cold. Thank you once again for another sensual and intense story.

Your writings are definitely under appreciated. This, in my opinion, should win the contest.

you do it again and again ... it's so impressive not to mention a real pleasure to read ... I've never been disappointed in one of your stories ... your gay male stories btw are always great *hint hint* ;)

this should win the contest ... you didn't rush it ... you deliberately slowed the action and increased the intensity because of it ... most writers veer off in the sex-act direction at the first opportunity but that misses the point of great erotica I think ... you pace the story so well and it only adds the final payoff :)

Absolutely a wonderful story, including the "climax" and language. Love it when they get mommy to talk dirty. Really a great story.

This one moved a little fast, for my taste, as usual, quite enjoyable.

Up to your usual great writing. I thoughaly enjoyed it!👏

Hi there Jasmin I was just wanted to know if you are going to ad a part two to this wonderful story.There was enough there for an opening like Hannah shows a Mada that her mother is a live in cunt muncher or while at parent teacher Hannah s mom shows her teacher how good of a pussy pleaser she is because of Hannah. Love you

how about inviting your friend and have a threesome,Love is all around. Ps i love your story.I get so ...

Great story. Loved the realism of the situation mom/daughter were in. The outcome just came naturally.

Jasmine,,,,another 5 star story..so hot multo orgasmic for all......thanks for sharing

Excellent plot, great story, very hot. It would be among the best for my taste if trib kept the main role.

Loved it.

Soaked. Going to have to swim to Victorias Secret for some new panties. Great work and an awesome read.

Excellent work!

This story is extremely sexy. Somehow you made a few hours feel like the hottest slow burn ever. Absolutely fantastic!

Three stars because I was waiting for kissing mouth action and never came.

Sorry, I'm an inveterate romantic.

Incredibly HOTT and so very sexy. My pussy is soaked. Can't wait to read more of your stories

This is to good to be one chapter. Not enough like this.

Not too keen when people start calling themselves or their partners "slut". But that's just me. A very fine, well thought out and exciting story.

Ohh. My my. This was fantastic. Hope there’s more

Had good story going but you messed up it the mess up was huge you went disrespectful with the whole mommy slut crap those words ruin every story every time which takes your rating way down sorry but as I said you ruined it with the disrespect

I love the ‘slut’ talk. It is so humiliating to be called a slut and something I really get off on. My pussy gets so wet every time a guy or girl calls me a slut. I got so wet reading your story that I masturbated to two orgasms by rubbing my clit and then climaxed while thrusting my dildo deep inside me to a gushing 3rd orgasm. (5 stars all the way)

Up to your usual hot excellence! Love a hot incestuous lesbian story!

Fantastic. I just love your passion

Squirting Piss is not erotic. Killed the story instantly for me.

Another awesome story! I have busy fingers in my very soggy panties whenever I read your mother/daughter stories..Mommy slut and squirting always make me gush..all over my fingers and hand or vibe..I use the word Slut often..and love being called a cumslut..you use of the term is approps everytime..thank you for your stories..please keep them coming..

Presses all the buttons!

To Anonymous 3 months ago, It's not squirting piss, you ignoramus, learn about how a woman can cum before you rant.

I loved this story. It shows the true love of a daughter and her mother. Being a male, I’m always attracted to stories of lesbians and incest is my favorite. I have myself been involved in some minor forms of incest between willing and over 18 participants. I hope you keep writing new stories. Thank you for sharing.

207. Just loved it. One of the few that has no blackmail or other tricks to turn the unsuspecting person. And both were happy.

These types of stories always make me wish I was a woman wonderful sexy story more please

I've seen it, felt it, smelled it, tasted it...and yes it's 90% piss

Very sexy with the mother and daughter showing concern, love, and respect for each other . The next story should focus on getting son/older brother Connor involved in a loving family threesome. Maybe a pregnancy involved which will start a family .

> "Mom, ENOUGH!" I shouted, slamming my palm onto the counter, a technique my father had often used to silence Mom.

> She looked at me in shock

God damn.

Any woman who has been with a real man will tell you we ain't completely useless in bed and that you can't replace the real thing you saying men are useless in bed says you never been with a real man before I don't mean some boy I mean a man don't insult or knock us until you have

I thought it was utterly unbelievable and implausible, but so erotic and sexy. My dick was hard and I was leaking cum throughout the reading.