All Comments on 'Comic Con Virgin: Day One - Yvonne'

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tnadnudertnadnuderover 9 years ago
Not bad, until...

About 3-4ths down Page 1 when she starts doing things to "HER balls"... And that's letting a lot of spelling & punctuation mistakes (in all your stories I've read) go.

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