All Comments on 'Coming Clean'

by Otzchiim

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nicely done

Very sweet story...and yes, your point of view in terms of writing these stories is not the quintessial male approach. Very nice.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Sensuous Seduction!

Joel and Lucy take their time arriving at the door of sexual activity. Written in a quiet pleasant way - they finally, after a slow leisurely pace, enjoy achieving their mutual satisfaction. Beautiful tender story. Well Written!

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