All Comments on 'Coming Home'

Your writing has improved some. Still a long way to go but I admire your continued effort. Clearly, you have an imagination and have a desire to see your thoughts strung together in the written word. I say keep working, keep trying, keep at it. Be open to learning to improve while you avoid defensiveness.

Some improvement my ass ! Your writing is Awsome I loved how the story just flowed from start to finish. It was almost like taking the journey with him. Please continue it and soon.

I don't know why the anonymous comment thought this was better but had a long way to go. I find your writing style and ability well above par and if the anonymous commenter is such an expert he should sign his post so we can read his stories that he must have posted to become such a discerning critic.

I am looking forward to the ensuing chapters! Well written, well edited and well above the normal submissions.

Can't wait for what's to come.

back to the old homestead and the trials and tribulations involved. TK U MLJ LV NV

very interesting plot. I appreciate that you have remained coherent through all of this, there was a lot of imformation here. Good job.

i soo want to know how this will play out..so please finish the story

also finish "you think you know" that left me very intrigued also.

=)

For not completing it. Why bother posting this?

It's authors like you that foul up this site. You should not be allowed to post unless the story is finished. I wish they would delete all unfinished stories. This story had promise but you I didn't bother to finish. You completely wasted my time.

to nothing

4 years of silence is too long.

Where is Part 2???

Come oonnnn....

3 stars

where is the rest of the story?

What the heck is this??? Not even close to being a complete story. Not even a wham, bam, thank you ma'am...

Was good till author ran out of ideas.

that's it? Why so short

What do I think of this story? WHAT STORY?

Why is it writers write a story and never finish it. But still post it for everyone to read. Yet a writer writes a story and adds chapters to keep it worth while to enjoy and this site runs them out saying crap about them. This should never have been posted until it was finished. Eleven years and not even a chapter 2.

did you die or something, 11 years and no chapter 2