All Comments on 'Coming Home Ch. 02'

This is so hot! You write really well. I've been waiting for this second update and it didn't disappoint. Can't wait for more.

You can't stop there. This is really good, I hope to read more

Once again, fantastic dialogue. The part with them fucking in the store was great. And I also enjoyed the dialogue part where the dad tries to ask what their relationship is and the daughter teased that her sister might like it, and said that she was just enjoying the time with her father.

The sex scenes need more detail though, along with more descriptions of her body.

-HeyAll

I have always had sick and twisted thoughts about the father taking his daughter as his lover. This story has all of what I imagine, but I do agree Kerri should have been described in slight more detail. But keep this coming, I want more!

Keep going....holiday was supposed to be coming up, I think a sister should show up and get involved, with both of them.

Cannot wait for the next installment.

And it keeps on getting better.

Good read...