by autoplot
This has been such a great piece! Very god writing with an honest feel to it! I would love to see more of this even beyond chapter 4. Please think about doing so as a few here have become fans of this story!
great for a rainy holiday at home. Am looking forward to reading the subsequent chapters, but each so far has gotten 5 stars from me. Compelling, Hot, thought provoking...and believable. thank you
well written in a very caring, loving way, quite out of the ordinary for a daddy/daughter incest story,,,i love it! most incest tales are very sophomoric and juvenile,,,,not so here,,more like this please!!
Such a hot story, well put together, suspense, indecision then the lust let loose BEAUTIFULLY DONE. Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!