All Comments on 'Coming Home: Davis Brothers Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
OMG

I never expected Lonnie and Brandon to come together like that! But that was friggin perfect. Brandon is so hard headed and Lonnie is kinda ballsy. I like that mix :))

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
lovin it

this is turning out to be a great branch off story! :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
WOW (BUT IN A GOOD WAY)

I AM LOVING THIS STORY! this is turning out to be a great series. I can't wait to see how Brandon handles his stupid issue. I kinda want Lonnie to do really good for himself or for him to be gone when Brandon shows up next. lol I'm stopping but I just wanted to say that I really love this story! =)

tbsigma08tbsigma08about 13 years ago
In Love

with this new series! Keep up the good work!

nomoretears00nomoretears00about 13 years ago
Oh man...

Brandon is so in over his head lol. I hope Lonnie twists him up good :)

Great series, as always!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I need more!!

Oh my god this is so great I can't wait to find out what happens!! we must have the next chapter!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
More please!

The ball is now in Brandon's court so to speak. Can't wait to see what happens next **evil grin**

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Can't wait

I can't wait to see what is going to happen next with Brandon and Lonnie. Will be interesting to see how Ben handles being taken care of by Benji. Hope that the next part of this story comes just as quickly as this part did!!

LoveBird1929LoveBird1929about 13 years ago
Oh Boy

Methinks Brandon's in for it now lol

seeker71seeker71about 13 years ago
Stellar

You sir never disappoint, a stellar chapter. This series is so well done. Lonnie and Brandon are refreshing. You do what you do so well... consistently. I look forward to the next chapter, as always.

Peace and joy,

Shell

ivy99sunshineivy99sunshineabout 13 years ago
I wonder

If you truly know how talented you are? All of your stories draw an emotion from me. This is just another great story in a long line of great stories. Thank you :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Loved it!!

Another fantastic chapter!!!

I can't wait for more!

trinisamplertrinisamplerabout 13 years ago
Loved it

yet another one of your stories that i can't get enough of!

just wait until Brandon stops running from Lonnie!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

I feel like smacking both of them upside the head!! Brandon for being such an ass and Lonnie for having no pride whatsoever LOL Love it and want to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Love ur stories

julrijulriabout 13 years ago
Thank you again!

thank you. All your stories are excellent. Cant wait for the next chapter. I cant tell you how many times i have read them... Never get tired of any of them.

thank you again.

ImondiaImondiaabout 13 years ago

Great...need more!

QhuayLoveQhuayLoveabout 13 years ago
:]

Go Lonnie for talking back to Brandon! Brandon was acting like a hypocritical ass and I'm really glad that Lonnie finally called him out on it. Also, now that Benji knows about Lonnie, I hope Brandon will reconsider kicking him out. Thanks for the wonderful chapter and please update soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Go Lonnie

Love your new story. Time to post next chapter, right?

WolfGirl102WolfGirl102about 13 years ago
Yay (:

Love this new chapter, please continue with this story really fast. (:

hentaifangirlhentaifangirlabout 13 years ago
Awesome

When will the next chapter come out? Your fans are anxiously awaiting.

afrodita79afrodita79about 13 years ago
Can´t wait

Miss you sooo much, glad your back with a greate story, but I don´t like that Brandon it´s acting so badlly.... hope you don´t make them sufur tu much.... jijiiji

CarelessLoveCarelessLoveabout 13 years ago
Can't Wait For More.

I definately want to see if Lonnie and Brandon end up together. They would make a wonderful couple. Ricky is adorable even though Brandon calls him an ugly little mutt.^_^

Can't wait to read more. Thank you.

royalkissroyalkissabout 13 years ago
WELL HELL...

Damn what an explosive coming together for Brandon and Lonnie. Who knew Brandon had so much 'alpha' in him. Ben may be the gentle giant, but I don't think that's going to describe Brandon at all - hahaha! I am so, so glad you are back! This is fast becoming my favorite story by you. Please update soon as I can't wait for Brandon's 'closet door' to swing wide, the fuck, open.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Round 1: Brandon 0 Lonnie 0

Round 2: Brandon 0 Lonnie 1

Round 3:??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

If I were Lonnie I'd have a crush on Brandon too. Wow. He's hot!

WittePietWittePietabout 13 years ago

I think Lonnie is sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

I love the Big Ben series and the sequel is even better! Ben and Brandon are so damn hot!!! Stoked that Ben grew out the moustache he started in Big Ben and that Benji is so turned on by it......sexy!

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 13 years ago

god poor Brandon but go Lonnie hehe

shhh_mellowshhh_mellowabout 12 years ago
Loved it!!!

You are an amazing writer. please keep the stories coming!!!

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66over 11 years ago
Silly Brandon

So cute but so silly....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Closet gay

Brandon is turned on by the small cute guy but can't get past his thoughts of some guy turning him on.

Spadger2Spadger2over 6 years ago
Facing Reality

Of course, Benji would be distressed at Ben's injuries, and would be determined to help him in his recovery. The work situation would definitely have to take a very poor second place.

As for Brandon's relationship with Lonnie, it is obvious where that is heading. Despite the great "blow job' performed by Lonnie, Brandon ran away scared of his own feelings and attraction to Lonnie.

Looking forward to further developments!!! Love from Patrick (Spadger2)

Spadger2Spadger2about 6 years ago
Best Blow Job Ever

Well, even if I had not read the story before, it is obvious where this is heading.

Spadger2Spadger2almost 5 years ago
Surprise Development

It seems that Brandon is just realising that Lonnie is playing an important part in his life, despite his protestations about gayness.

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