All Comments on 'Coming Home - Extended Version'

Loved it. A great story. Really happy to have a closure for the two. Keep up the good work.

Look forward to learning more about them both.

5/5

ram

I look forward to the next instalment.

HP

This is a lovely story and the 'cough and tiara' line is both funny and touching.

Made me cry a bit,a beautiful story from a dark.place.

Great read thanks for the reboot,

VERY GOOD TRUE LOVE STORY. I UNDERSTAND WHY SHE RAN AWAY BECAUSE SHE WAS NOT AWARE HOW DEEPLY THAT HE LOVED HER. GREAT ENDING THEY LOVED EACH OTHER.

RON

This story was a bit of a roller coaster ride. That added to its enjoyment.

I was worried that it didn't even need more. but what you added made it a complete story.

nicely done.

Wow!! It's such an amazing story! I can't believe you put into 4 pages sooo much emotion and such a large story arc! Not only was the story and the idea awesome but your writing was too good to be true! It's perfect! Every bit of it! I enjoyed it a lot and thank you very much indeed for such an awesome tale! Hats off!!

Love love love the story. I am speechless. You are an amazing amzing artist.... u made me feel so... idk man.

5* dont do justice. Maybe a crown would...

With no doubt a nice story.

I loved it.

If only every homeless person had such a loving member of the opposite gender to get them back on their feet. These two are such a sweet couple.

Well this extended version has a much better ending. Well Done 5 stars

(2/20/2022) Finding his long-lost love homeless on a street corner. Hmm..., divine intervention? This was an enjoyable read. Well done. Five stars.

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[28.12.22]

Tres Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

Sweet romance *****

Much better than the less complete version. Still, a bit abrupt of an ending, but much better. 4*