All Comments on 'Coming in Colours Ch. 05'

Dialogue was fairly well written, some inconsistencies (calling Alec 'Rick', for example), decent plot. But I couldn't get over my irritation with the guys. They were blackmailing little coward and felt more like annoying little frat boys. I like my male protagonists to be MEN. I just felt sorry for the woman, which is hard to do when she was obviously, later, into things.