by Dr Jerkyls Hyde
This is a pretty incredible story you have going here. You mention it'd been some time since your last episodes and I'm guessing I've missed them. I'm going to have to catch up a bit.
Except for a few typos and unsound word-choices, the quality of the writing was captivating. Usually I don't find multi-page stories keep my attention and most of the serial stories have lost their power long before reaching a seventh episode. If the first six are anything like this, I'll be reading every word.
Cheers for a good read!
One of the best series ive read lately. Keep it going! Excellent job. Except I thought he was in a GTO not a Ferrari. Maybe i missed something