All Comments on 'Coming of Age'

Fantastic. 5 stars. Wish I could give more. Very erotic.

I really enjoy reading your stories.This one has some kind of formatting errors Where a capital C shows up randomly at the end of words or between words. You would be well served by proofreading the story and submitting a cleaned up version.

Good story but the letter "'C'' comes up randomly during conversation....other than that no complaints

Do you have a long fingernail or what? Seeing the letter C pop up randomly and in-appropiately throughout detracted from an otherwise pretty good story. Proof reading does wonders!

really loved the tale. as always, very intelligently written. after a while i hardly noticed the "C". Whats great about your stories is there's a tease, great sex, but still a tease or twist or something to resolve. and a lot of great sex along the way. just really brilliant. of course, 5 stars!!

From the author: thanks to those who reported the "C's." These were not in my original submission. Where the "C's" appear there should be an em-dash. I have submitted a bug report.

Quite enjoyed this, however much of the dialogue reads like the written word, rather than spoken conversation. It unfortunately substantially diminished the eroticism.

What's with all the weird spacing/breaks?

Your awareness of girls' needs shows you understand that most of a man's enjoyment can come from the achievement of real intense and prolonged pleasure in his partner(s). Also that the tongue is mightier than any other part of his body! (See the Kahn report - a survey of hundreds of women who put cunnilingus at the top of their lists)

Very hot story! Awesome.