All Comments on 'Coming of Age'

8 pages of (The O.C.) meets (All My Children) - Waste of time.

A piece about a young woman coming to grips with her sexuality and doing so with a woman twice her age is no easy writing task, but this piece feels real and flows nicely. Like how you develop not only the two MCs and their relationship but also the other relationships that impact Kaylee — Mom, Dad, Sarah, Carlton — minor, yes, but important to this romantic storyline. And the intensely erotic sex scenes just what you’d expect for Kaylee and Lena as they get to know one another — sex more like love making just as Kaylee described it. Enjoyable read; nothing wrong with a “feel good” piece that puts a smile on your face.

Loved it, great story and not what I expected, heart goes out to her best friend but thanks for the, for me, surprise. You and onehitwanda within 24 hours, what a treat and a side helping of Ann Douglas, what more could us freeloaders ask for. I know you want genuine feed back but if I don't like what you give for free I just shut up but when like this I can't put it down I say thanks.

I thought it was precious and rich with love,hope,suspense and sex.

Excellent job, made my dick hard!

I enjoyed it, now I need the wedding special, Kiki meeting Lena parents.

There's always an anonymous naysayer ready with a puerile comment. I say 'entertaining fiction.' Thanks

To pcman1950:

Where does it say that comments have to be compliments?

When did honesty become an insult?

It's an observation. You find it entertaining good for you.

Read on knight and shining armor

thanks so much, indeed we are spoiled, Ann, Wanda and your story released together. Just a small nitpick, the Porsche is either a '69 911 S or a "79 911 SC, I'm wondering which one, sorry can't help checking the small details in stories. Cheers

Well written but please continue.

Well, I hope this is just the beginning of this lovely couples saga.

Your characters are so easy to invest in, I envy your talent.

Very entertaining and fast moving, enjoyment!!

20 years old, still daughter and then pushed into a coming out scenario ..... Taking it by your own speed and best possible timetable, instead being pressured into it, would be a preferable action ...... But all went well and love is in the air ...... Cute tale

💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝🌟

Disappointed that it wasn't her lifelong best friend Sarah.

Brilliant as usual.

You never disappoint. Thank you for this very enjoyable read.

Wonderful read SWP...as always. Well thought out and carefully constructed. Good job.

Great story, well written and well balanced. You write dialog so well, and there’s nothing formulaic about the sex. Way above the usual Lit level, I hope you continue with Kaylee and Lena