All Comments on 'Coming of Age Ch. 02'

by Khrystyne

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

great story! very entertaining ....

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please continue

Its well written and I love her scheming. : )

And I also like that you take your time in building the tension.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
keep on with it....

great start and character development, I want more......

lilwolfspiritlilwolfspiritover 12 years ago
Keep up the good work

i do like this story, i like to see where this goes, still a bit short but its always hard to determine the length with lit. But excellent chapter, nice character building and i can't wait to read more.

Donna

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
More please!

Liking the story so far, can't wait to read more!

taredheltaredhelabout 12 years ago

brilliant story, cant wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I really hope you write another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
MORE PLEASE

I am loving this story. Please, please, please write some more. You are talented. Share some more of your talent with us :o)

zimamadrezimamadreover 8 years ago
wrong category

This is in the wrong category. It should be in the romance section. Will you ever finish your story?

Anonymous
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