by Khrystyne
Its well written and I love her scheming. : )
And I also like that you take your time in building the tension.
great start and character development, I want more......
i do like this story, i like to see where this goes, still a bit short but its always hard to determine the length with lit. But excellent chapter, nice character building and i can't wait to read more.
Donna
I am loving this story. Please, please, please write some more. You are talented. Share some more of your talent with us :o)
This is in the wrong category. It should be in the romance section. Will you ever finish your story?