All Comments on 'Coming Out of My Shell Ch. 03'

by BrainyJaney

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Captain_RonCaptain_Ronover 8 years ago
Great Followup

I really like how you're progressing the story and the style of your writing. Looking forward to more.

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 8 years ago
A lovely story

You write so well about this young lady's blossoming into her true, sensual self. Thank you for sharing your talent with us -- five stars.

motordaddymotordaddyover 8 years ago
If You Were a Few Years Older

you could have been part of our group in college in rural Texas in the 70's. Keep telling us more as I relive the past through you.

RoperTraceRoperTraceover 8 years ago
Outstanding!

Great work Janey! If your next chapters get any hotter, I'll be reading them with one hand.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassabout 7 years ago
Now I'm jealous

Never had a girl stop by my dorm room and show her boobs or drop her panties when I was in college.

Janey, you must have had a five-star reputation among the guys.

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