All Comments on 'Coming to Terms Ch. 01'

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too clinical! A writer composes a storyline not only to pass along factual details, but to capture the reader. Your story is lacking the element of capture. Not sure you'll be able to grasp this, but I felt compelled to tell you, anyway. Also, your so-called editor missed quite a few errors. ("no fowl"????? Hilarious! "no foul"!!)

If mom would have really listen to her daughter, she would have seen a long time ago that her daughter was in love with her and wanted a sexual relationship with her.Once the daughter had a taste of her mother's pussy, there wouldn't be any going back to their old mother/daughter nonsexual relationship.I like reading about mothers giving in to their offspring , and allowing a sexual coupling between them. Thanks for the good story.....Rich

Can't wait for the next chapter. Really great work!

Can't wait for the next chapter! And don't mind the criticism, the perfect story does not exist!!!

Please continue with this story. It is a great story and needs to be continued, as it is a great story.

I found this strange. I was not sure if I was reading about a fetish or lesbian incest. Also, the actual sex came (excuse pun) short and sweet at the end. Such a build-up and then the mother goes off like a rocket and then tires like the cliched man! Therefore I'm left feeling unconnected with the story. Sorry.

Very nice story. Great effort!