All Comments on 'Comission Kalysta: Hard Knocks'

use you as nothing but pieces of meat to carry unwanted bastards into the future. You very dumb ones need to form unions to protect yourselves since you are smart enough to even know to use condoms. Then as a union you can get cheap rates on medical insurance to pay for pregnancies when husbands divorce you for having black bastards, for STDS, and the ever present AIDS crisis in this world of BBC lifestyle. Cant really expect a loving betrayed husband paying for your sins can you, although they may be very nice and arrange for you to have a small lead pill.

Written with passion and interesting descriptive language; I shall read some more of your work. The part where she loses her pills is implausible and I think it would have been better if you could have written that part differently.

Dumbest shit I've ever read! 1 star.