All Comments on 'Committed'

Fantastic! I'm really enjoying your stories! Keep up the great work!

A little slow for me but intriguing storyline so I'm eager to see the next step. It's hard to avoid the "rape" tag for a story like this but you've done a good job for a nonconsent story that is erotic without turning off the reader.

Logan is seemingly so benign and yet so obcessively evil. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Well done Ryleigh.

J

A very well written story but the theme is not one that has a great appeal for me.

and yet he truly does exert his control over her. his calm demeanor a great foil for his obsession and danger.

Well done.

Very nicely done. I like the way Adena is being ravished (not that I like Logan's character though so you did a good job portraying him). You descriptions are nice and vivd.

One small part I was confused about. Did Adena fall asleep sometime after the music played and during the description of their first date?