All Comments on 'Community Service Ch. 04'

Worse? You lower the iq of this site just by posting your stories.

Despite the other rude and entirely uncalled for comment, I enjoyed this part and hope the story will continue. Keep up the good work!

Great – you sound as though you were tuned in to what I was doing.

And thank you for your encouragement!

I'm still working on Ch. 5.

In Ch. 5, I focus on the immediate repercussions of John's well-meaning, but ill-advised and ultimately disastrous recommendation to David: "Just don't go back." (To the Sock Room).

I tip my hat to you, sir. You have put together quite a riveting yarn thus far. What is so scary about this story for me is how frighteningly close that something similar to this can ACTUALLY happen here in the States. Major Kudos for realism! You have really made me care for the protagonist; I could literally feel myself getting angrier and angrier as the extent of the Party's totalitarian treachery continues to be peeled off like layers of an onion. I am totally sucked in now.