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by AchtungNight

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janiexxjaniexxalmost 18 years ago
Oh, I certainly enjoyed...

I've never read a story in the Celebrity section before but I think I've started with one of the best.

I loved your writing - it carried me along and wouldn't let me stop reading. A very good, easy style that seems unforced and natural.

This deserves to do well, for the writing alone.

janiexx

FreyaGersemiFreyaGersemi4 months ago

I agree with @janiexx 100%!! Your writing style is very relaxed and natural. It felt like you were just telling a story and the story was carrying all the weight. None of the extraneous adjectives piled on one another. Wonderful!!!

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I am an Internet fanfiction author who enjoys penning fantasy movies starring my favorite celebrities. I have posted some of my erotic writings here. More can be found here- https://archiveofourown.org/users/Achtungnight/pseuds/Achtungnight Enjoy! Note- for those interested i...