All Comments on 'Competition'

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skyink93skyink93almost 11 years ago
Quick reversal of emotions...

However with such good writing you tied it together rather well, thank you for sharing your skill with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Cat and mouse

Excellent. I really liked the cat and mouse battle between Susan and Frank for the promotion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Too short

I loved it. Very short, but done well. Would like to have seen a longer more thorough story. But was short and sweet

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Kind of dumb!

At the very beginning, the author states that Frank and Walt are on the Board of Directors for the company. Thus they are bigwigs in this company. So what promotion are they possibly going to get?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Alcohol

I sure wish that their first night together hadn’t been a complete alcohol fueled blackout. Kind of ruined it for me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Liked the ending

Wish more employees gelled together and worked as a team with trust in each other.

THEN companies would not be able to abuse talented employees.

AND the talented employees could leave to create own company instead of fuming over unfair promotion and pay hike scenarios.

I think, I like this approach.

Thanks, author! :)

PyjamamanPyjamaman9 months ago

Very sweet and nice

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