All Comments on 'Competition Cups Ch. 05'

Get some drama in there! Have Brittney consider or actually cheat or something. Hot stuff otherwise, just getting a little repetitive.

Thank you for the suggestion. I had developed the character Brittney as busty, loving, and completely loyal. Having her cheat would ruin her character. You have instilled some good ideas in my mind for the future though.

You don't fin really good big boob fiction out there these days. And I, for one, totally enjoy the fact that the action is centered around Brittany's tits. And the fact that she seems to enjoy it even more than he does makes it even hotter. Keep up the good work.

exactly my point. I have read my share of Literotica, but it's good to read and write something of my own. The story may get a bit repetitive but it IS Literotica, I mean that's what these stories are supposed to be about.

I can only read so much of the 'standard fare' on Literotica before it all seems the same. Your work, on the other hand, reaches out to a special niche that is difficult to find. That's what makes them unique and that's why the stories are still great even if they seem a bit repetitive to some. Besides, the varying scenes keeps them from being too repetitive. Or to say it another way, you can't get too much of a good thing.