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by PaulStevens

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bryanforbryanforalmost 14 years ago
The conclusion of a Beautiful Story

There is no doubt whatsoever in my mind that you are a very skilful Author. The emotions you have portrayed between all the characters, has captured the imagination of this reader.

Thank you for the pleasure your Story has given to me.

Bryanfor

PaulStevensPaulStevensalmost 14 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the compliment but...

This is not over quite yet. I apologize if I fooled anyone and I hope I'm not going too long on this story but there is still a few more chapters to go yet. Stay tuned

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Really enjoying your writing....BUT..

..could you stop writing Brandon like a confused and befuddled 16 year old. It's a little bit off putting :)

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I am working on a few stories, including a draft of a seemingly long-awaited sequel to my summer camp story. Stay tuned, and as always, feedback is appreciated.

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