by subdued_passion
These are too short. Even though you post regularly, you might as well put two chapters together. Also, this isn't romantic at all. It might be going there, but I don't see it.
I appreciate readers taking the time to leave comments or mail me feedback.
I feel I need to remind the readers of my note at the start of chapter 1. Complicated is not a series. It's just one story that I submitted to Lit in chapter form (I submitted the entire story over a week ago).
I've realised that when looking at the chapters individually they don't appear very romantic, because I didn't write them as individual stories. However, I can see merit in the feedback of changing the story category- I'll submit the change request once the admin is done updating all chapters.
And apologies for the typos and grammatical errors- I need to work on my editing skills. :)
I am just reading this now and I think its fantastic!! I read your note at the beginning of 'ch.1' and I can also read between the lines. Put this story whether you think it should be. Thanks for a fabulous story! x