All Comments on 'Confession CYOA'

Good writing, though.

Having multiple "The End"s was confusing and it could have been broken into chapters instead. Also, writing it in second-person was odd. Not all of us are named John.

What an asshole!

Where were you going without ever knowing the way? Were you leading, dragging or just trying to see if I might catch up? Cant really tell what I'm supposed to feel after being exposed to all the possibilities so I just dont feel much of anything. Theres probably a good story or two in there but it seems like too many things got mixed into the soup. Sugar and garlic are both tasty, but not together.

Probably the most confused, jumbled, ill-thought-out excuse for a story, if you excuse the cellphone submissions of a few functionally illiterate members here.

Really.

Not even an interesting exercise in technique.

Were you on drugs when you "wrote" this?

5 stars

I am trying to write my own CYOA on here. It is harder than it looks.