All Comments on 'Confession - My First Anal'

The story was extremely abbreviated and you gave very few details about anything. There was almost no dialogue whatsoever and you gave almost zero insight into the characters. It felt more like I was reading a summary than an actual story. I feel like this could've been really good if you'd actually taken the time to describe what was going on. Realistically, each paragraph could have been expanded into a whole chapter by adding more details, dialogue, scenery, and character description. I had a similar problem when I first started writing, although that was many years ago and I've gotten so much better at it since then.

I too was nervous about anal but after the first time, it got much easier and it makes me cum harder sometimes than regular sex. She was a lucky 18 y.o. I didn't have this experience until I was in my 30's but I'm sure glad I did ;)