All Comments on 'Confession Time Pt. 01'

I loved this story. I have a secret desire for my cousin and have had a similar fantasy about her. I'm really looking forward to part 2

I love how fresh this feels, your writing captures the energy - playful and erotic. Keep writing!

it is obvious that you have not written much. keep trying! I didn't care much for this, but it didn't suck too bad. get a friend to proofread for you next time. (get someone well-versed enough to fix "should of" or "could of"). that would help a lot....