All Comments on 'Confession to My New Roommate'

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JayHaileyJayHaileyover 7 years ago
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Bambi_Doe exactly ridiculous!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Yea I agree, you would someone tell a complete stranger that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
nice

continue epic

prop69prop69over 7 years ago
great start

Looking for chapter 2

rodavrodavover 7 years ago

Just unless in the end that he was making this story to just bullshiting his roommate, this is going to be unrealistic.

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 7 years ago
more please

You have to keep going

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Ya? Ya! Yaaahha? Yayayhaa? Yayayhaa?? Yaaahha!

WTF! IT'S YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH LIKE DID YOU FUCK HER DOOD! FUCKING FUCK YEAH I FUCKING FUCK FUCKED HER

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

try for something more realistic, in terms of the setup for a confession. He's not going to confess to someone he just met, that he's going to be around again.

You confess to either a confidant, or to someone you are never going to see again, who has no investment in you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
shit

all i could read was "i was like" "she was like" i mean seriously if your'e going to write an unrealistic story at least have some decent wording

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Next chapter

Hope I remember to check back and find you again. I like to finish this story. It's good so far. Thanks☺

TakashiTakashi8 months ago

"Ya?" They German?

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