by storiesfromtheotherside
Just unless in the end that he was making this story to just bullshiting his roommate, this is going to be unrealistic.
Ya? Ya! Yaaahha? Yayayhaa? Yayayhaa?? Yaaahha!
WTF! IT'S YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH LIKE DID YOU FUCK HER DOOD! FUCKING FUCK YEAH I FUCKING FUCK FUCKED HER
try for something more realistic, in terms of the setup for a confession. He's not going to confess to someone he just met, that he's going to be around again.
You confess to either a confidant, or to someone you are never going to see again, who has no investment in you.
all i could read was "i was like" "she was like" i mean seriously if your'e going to write an unrealistic story at least have some decent wording
Hope I remember to check back and find you again. I like to finish this story. It's good so far. Thanks☺