All Comments on 'Confessions From An Affair Ch. 04'

Thanks, I remember a ride much like that but without a girl by my side. Very well written. I'll be waiting for the second chapter.

You evoked similar memories of a different ride to a different war. I guess some things never change. The sexual encounter while in travel is another story; one does not have to wait for a war time for that...Thanks again for your solid quality writing!

This story is coming along well.

The author is doing a fine job of catching the flavour of the times and the way the character is changing.

Well done.

Well done LM, this chapter is best yet. Well written, I was there on the train. I could hear all of the different accents and was caught up in the story.

I look forward to your next chapter!!

Great story, I love the character development. The descriptions of what the main character is experiencing are terrific as you include all the senses. I love reading about her thoughts and feelings. Very real and down to earth. A clear perception of a different time that allows the reader to truly imagine what it must have been like. I happily anticipate your next installment, LM. :-)

Beautiful job of building characters, setting, and sexual tension. Your story made me wish I was sitting across from them on the train.