by RedHotLadybug
I could tell this story was well thought out. The plot and reasoning of the added characters were... um... different. In a good way.
I'm curious what the next one will include. Maybe some recurring characters?
I might have read them more- I'll admit I didn't know the thrushbeard story but I read it after reading this- I like the way you embellished the original story and made it more complex
I seldom run across smut that is good. You managed to keep to the essence of the original tale, keep the storyline, and put sex in it where it would work. Good job!
Good story telling. I loved reading Grimm's fairy tales as a child and thoroughly enjoyed your version as an adult. Thank you! I am lookling forward to reading more of your work. Entertaining and red hot, lady!
I was raised on these old tales, and your take on both the action and the language is highly entertaining while cleverly straddling the line between applying a modern context and staying true to the originals. Thanks for a great read and I look forward to more great work!