by Seahawk76
A least there is something between Danica and Barbara...
Just if there is some errors from Barbara it does not appears clearly...
I read the entire series. I'm not generally a fan of domination/humiliation stories, but Danica is a powerful character in her way, and Barbara shows her vulnerability here and there that makes her more human. You've got a very well-written story here with a fairly good premise, and I enjoyed it thoroughly, despite it being outside of my normal bailiwick. Bravo, and good show.
Hate to say this, but this story series seems to be running out of steam. A new direction is needed , and new ideas , if this story is to go forward. Is what we are seeing, Barbara's final game plan ? A relationship with Danica ? Or does Barbara have a wider agenda she wants to pursue ? Do hope you can take us in the new direction this series needs.
Phew. Hot stuff. I can't wait until all the mailgirls are experts in Nuru massage.
I have wondered if this story might take a twist when the second mailgirl, Kelly, completes her contract and manipulates the CEO into forcing Barbara to become an executive mailgirl. I imagine Kelly convincing him that Barbara is a closet submissive just pining for a real man to subdue her and convincing him to force Barbara to sign the mailgirl contract.
I wonder if this serial will become a book and major motion picture...
It's time for some 4" heels for danica, for her twice daily promenades, door to door
and for other trips around town, also a pair for the girl in the coding lab,
How did the mayoral election turn out? Wlll the girls go city wide?
Many loyal fans hoping for further chapters,