All Comments on 'Confessions of a Wolf Ch. 01'

Get an editor and resubmit this mess

Seemed like a good story, but I couldn't finish it because it kept switching from first to third person. Breaks the immersion when I'm trying to jerk off, dude.

As to the change from first to third person, that was a very interesting idea (though not perfectly executed).

As others have said, swaps from "I" to "she" and is impossible to finish.

I rarely leave a comment, but in this case, I had to. Your lack of being able to keep the tense straight totally killed what may have been a great story, but I'll never know, as I couldn't possibly keep reading it. I'm sure there are plenty of people that could help and/or edit for you, I suggest you consider this before submitting your next installment. Otherwise, you are just wasting your time.