All Comments on 'Confessions of a Wolf Ch. 02'

by diegoroyo

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
pronouns

Stick to first person. I/me not she/her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A Fairly Good Read

Quite interesting. A bit of tension would have helped. Suggest you learn the difference between 'discrete' and 'discreet'.

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