All Comments on 'Confusion Ch. 04'

... and I was wrong about Joe having an affair with Diane. But this reads like a Peter Sellers comedy of errors. And I really hate Don who is portrayed as a truly self-centered dumbass. Was I wrong about Pat from Atlanta too? hahaha irchristo@yahoo.com

Because I am tired of such short chapters.

dwornock

Giving a "1" for a short chapter is just another reason why you suck and nobody likes you.

Geeze. What a moron

He really is dumb. I could tell from the conversation between Joe and his wife that the guy was lying to her and tricking her into having sex.

seems fairly screwed up, and I rated it accordingly.

dumb cuck shit.

This story got kind of confusing. How many times did he step out into the hall? It was quite a few times. The end one was that he had the handle of the door with his head resting on it then closed the connecting door and stepped out once again into the hallway. Must have real long arms to be able to reach from the door to the connecting doors. And where did Jim come up with all this story? Did I miss something?

Well what else did he expect?.It was obviously a plot for Joe to get to fuck Dianne.

to widowedidiot; Jim(actually Joe) is doing some fast tap dancing to CYA. Don has no fantasy and bneither dies diane, about being or doing a sleeping victim. Don never tol;d jore that diane had a thing for him. Joe/jim is lying his ass off and prolly desperately hoping that Don never asks either bitch about what they were told by joe about the why who where what and how of this cluster fuck. Im thinking that dianes history, joe is going to have another reason why 1- his sperm cnt is low and 2- why he cant get his "log" up no mo. Diane is the most innocent but fucked up big time by letting Joe fuck her before verifying w/ Don WTF was going on. rk