All Comments on 'Congratulations on Your Pregnancy Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Definite hard on material

Keep it going, I'm looking forward to Shri's next experience

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Amazing

You have got to to continue, this has all the makings of a very long adventure. Bravo! Anxiously awaiting your next submission please dont leave us hanging too long.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very Good Story

I like the way this tale is evolving, and the characters are well fleshed out. It needs more parts to it too. Shri needs to continue to be trained as her Master's submissive, to get through her current pregnancy, then become pregnant again several times by her loving Master, not by her husband. Keep up the good work, and the good writing.

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Creative 50 yr old Dom, have written and lived out erotic experiences for years. Looking to finally start publishing and in time adding erotica photography to the mix. I appreciate this community ~ thank you and keep your sexy on! G