All Comments on 'Connielingus'

As one of my favored authors you didn't disappoint, I only wish you'd write more often. Great story, love the word play between the doctor and yourself, and even how the minor characters were seemingly in on the romantic encounter. The sex was well-described, yet sensual. This one may be your best yet! ~M

In the pilot for the series Dead Like Me, George torments her mother by using the word "moist" - not in a sexual context, but clearly the widespread dislike for the word is related to sexual body parts. It makes me laugh... but I can't use the word without imagining readers en mass going, "Eww!!!"

On the subject of reader reactions, some were complaining recently about "ropes of cum" - a phrase I'm quite guilty of using and enjoying. I think this has to do with escalation of erotic imagery in visual and written porn. Somehow the idea that a man produces a mere teaspoonful of cum has become inadequate, and we must show virility of futanari proportions... or maybe it's the writer's desire for a grand linguistic climax, ejaculating creamy metaphors onto the written page for the readers to lap up like grinning Cheshire cats.

None of this is criticism. I say: How better to make a reader moist than by (spell-)binding them with ropes of magical cum...

....for your insightful comments. Your observation on the need to express "the grand linguistic climax" were spot on, and I sometimes find myself over-reliant on the Thesaurus. Also, sincere apologies for borrowing your "ropes of cum" term, I'm sure it was planted in my subconscious through the reading of what I believe are some of the best stories on this site. CT

No apologies necessary. I'm not the only author to use it, and I'm sure I wasn't the first. I was just intrigued to see people complaining about it.

This is a marvelous love story. The romantic atmosphere pervades the entire plot, and is written with great tenderness, and in a descriptive way that is very tasteful, and never crude or harsh. The ending fairly begs for a sequel, and hopefully the author will write one soon. Five stars