by PaulGerard
this last chapter where you added the element of a secret rapid deployment defense force with individuals with magical powers of their own who may on occasion use the magic for their own titalation, and an alien influence does make the story much more interesting and adds possible angles that could add a lot of dimension to the story.
I would really love to read more of your stories in this setting you have. Invisible plants - never thought I'd find it so cool :)
I'm curious if you have a plotline extension for this story. It's been an interesting read.
Very enjoyable!