by JasonClearwater
I enjoyed it but I kinda feel sad for Darren, he’s young, impressionable and worships those guys, particular Stan.. who has it going all, with Connor, Darren and now Shae.. busy and sometimes sore boy I think. Thanks Jase,
I agree with Hutchinson. Every chapter leaves me feeling sad for Darren. No one in this little group is going to choose him.
I'm interested in what Shae is about and what her motivation is. So, yes, more along this line please.
It IS difficult not to feel sorry for Darren, but it seems to me that he's pretty pleased just to always be included, and they never leave him unsatisfied - so perhaps that's enough for him?
Great writing, as always - keep it up!