by TheBrownRecluse818
And great twist to this story didn't see it coming at all. Keep it going!
Any tips or advice would be greatly appreciated. Hope you enjoyed the story so far.
no advice, just a request. less time between chapters please!
This is a great story you've got here, and you even have a little bit of a sci-fi/fantasy thing going in there, too. Keep it coming!
Excuse me for a second:
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Looks like Nat may be needing a ring, too!
Great smutty writing at its finest, really enjoyed the storyline. so much potential to go further. Just threw me off with the Spanish verse Portuguese.
The "sex ring"?? Or "anti-sex ring"?? Oh, a giant cock?? Gee, no one on this site EVER writes about some guys big oversized magnetic cock. This is the stupidest lump of garbage I've ever read after years of reading stories. Glad to see you stopped writing. I hope this note finds you enjoying your retirement from drafting crap like this.
I only found this because you started writing again, thought it's a fun story hopefully you'll continue it now your back.
I would enjoy reading more of this series AND the United Nations series.
Loved the story, only 2 thjings annoyed me: brazillians speak portuguese not spanish, and that this story will probably never be completed.
Anyway if you are readind this dear author, great job!