by Megamuffin
I am mostly enjoying this except maybe for the group sex scene. Not really into that but as long as I can get to read some incest I will keep going.
The story started hard and pumping with the incest/group sex. Hot stuff. Then, I have to say the card game sucked the juice out of the action. I loves me a strip poker scene, but they only truly work when the majority of the players are tentative about losing bits of clothing. The two girls started out uncertain, but quickly became A-OK with stripping. After that, I'm afraid I just skimmed. Young teens ready to fuck, knowing they are there to fuck...why are we wasting so much time? Let the orgy begin! And, as a side note, the revelation that Connor had the biggest cock was anticlimactic. Letting real cards guide you was a bit of a mistake, in my opinion.
Do more, please!
love all the characters. what a fun, clever, sexy writer you are. please post some more great stories soon!!!!! 5 STARS - of course!