All Comments on 'Conquest'

Don't end it, please, sire, I beg of you. The overall story arch is the reunification of the country, with the personal lives the subplot. You've already set up the Dakotas. You'very got a lot of room to run with this.

Love the length and where you are going with this. Your writing is quite vivid, Thank you for so generously sharing it. I look forward to the next installment.

A thoroughly enjoyable read and needs to at least continue until the baby is born. A lot can happen in 9 months...unrest in some of the fringe territories and such.

Canada kicked Russia's ass? Are you fucking kidding me? The Canadians don't have a military to speak of!

great set up so far, please continue. I think there is also room for other side stories in this universe.

This plot has the makings of an actual mainstream novel (minus the explicit bits, of course). The writing is eloquent, the details are well laid out and organized, and if you're self edited...bravo! I love the balance between story and racy scenes, it plays out perfectly in my mind's eye. I'd love to see where Rhonda and Elliot go from here, and how parenting plays out in the new world! What would they name the baby? I could imagine that a strong, opinionated woman like Rhonda would want to pay homage to the father, but still give the son a monicher of his own, maybe Eli? Seriously, I don't often comment, but this story found me hoping for more, and disappointed to find there wasn't any. I can tell you that I, personally, would love to read more if you have it in you! Happy Writings and my best wishes for a fabulous day! - Megan

for an excellent story.

MUCH more worth twenty or thirty chapters than the Carter story!

Great story line. I would really like it to continue.

Great start, keep going!

If you don’t continue this book, I SWEAR (not literally) that I will find you and make you. Loving the story, great world building, and great characters.

Ths would make a fine serial, broken up ino segmdnts, starting at the end of the last elected adminstration straight through the unification fo the American continents!

Love the fact that Hilary was the end of the known world. I could see it....