by panama trick
Please let there be a follow up or more chapters to this story please :))).
TQ SIR HOTTIE! grin.. OH my this was so hot.. more to come I hope?? or shall I say more to CUM? grin, take care Sir Hottie. grin. runs like hell
how come i love this story? why is it You can write about girls that i would like to strangle..and i love it? a Magician and an Artist. Thank You...whens the next book coming out?
...and you tell Me you cannot write! This is better than most I have seen. Keep up the good work! BQ
Amazing and exilirating. You wrote a story that had an intriguing plot with perils and power and culiminated it in the ultimate way! Thank you and keep on writing! I loved it!
girl thinks this has to be one of her most favorite stories yet! right up there with the altar *grins* bravo Caro Mio..of course i absolutely loved being shown all about the woman in me by this incredible Man on the ship of erotica! i love You and i'm so proud to be Yours..keep up the good work!...xxx, fireinnereyes{TQ}
Please have more chapters along with this story!! Really wanna know what happen between Raj and the girl's mother, very very interesting!!
TQ, damn You know how to tell the tale of the transformation of a girl, of her awakening. only wish i'd known a Master such as Yourself when i first came of age. oxo,~ femmegyrl
It was defenitely erotica, but not the usual meaningless sex involved. The taming of an innocent was really hot! I hope you add more to this story, I would love to read more.
I'm afraid I didn't finish reading this. I got tired of all the run on sentences and other errors. Perhaps with a bit of editing I could make it to the end, but not in its current state.