All Comments on 'Consent Ch. 01-02'

Great!

It's damn great!

I love how Mistress Johanna talks about limits and warns about accepting everything blindly: it makes all so real!

What a story, or really the opening of one. Now we need to know if it moves onto the next stage.

I wasn't expecting such a powerful admiration when I started reading this, you are a very clever writer and I very much wish to see how this continues.

The editing was great; no errors that I could pick up and the story OMG the story.

I love the same things as you give or take and I would love to see the character develop the different fetishes that could easily be implemented into your wonderful situation. If I was to request certain things they would involve the degradation of this man specifically about how his love of panties should be a love for cock and that his asshole should be stretched so he can please men, all with enjoyment and some shame but mostly just enjoyment. Thanks for writing, I'll watch this space.

Panty slut177

Please go on, i so wish i was him

And you just didn't convince me he would do anything but leave her and never go back. I think he gave her a phony number (a woman's thing to do) and never saw her again. 1 star

QUOTE It's a long ways from fantasy to reality

And you just didn't convince me he would do anything but leave her and never go back. I think he gave her a phony number (a woman's thing to do) and never saw her again. 1 star UNQUOTE

Glad you picked that up. That is to be the story, the journey from fantasy to reality. I warned you to be patient and that I start slow. Jeez, you're stupid.

I'm hooked on this story already, great writing. I really hope there is more to come, I'm dying to know where this goes.

QUOTE: From the stupid among us

Comments:

You can't write a decent story to save your life. But you are right about one thing. These silly things you call stories seem to appeal to about 5 people on this site. Might as well keep trying to write something decent. It's always good for a laugh. Maybe you should try the Humor/Satire section? UNQUOTE

The above by personal message to me from ANON. Guess I struck a chord when I called him/her stupid. Jeez, he is so stupid.

Slow start but well written enough to make it worth "setting the stage" for. Nice job.

I can't wait for your next installment. Wow

Just like TV if you don't like what you see change the channel and don't yell at the TV! I for one enjoy your 'submission' errrrr submissions. Hope you are well.

PERSONAL MESSAGE to author from ANON:

QUOTE: Wow! You're really dumber than your stories aren't you? Afraid of a dissenting point of view? UNQUOTE

You're right; I don't like dissenting points of view regarding my writing. What writer does? My writing is just fine; it's your comprehension and compassion for poorly understood fetishes that are lacking. If someone must dislike my stuff because he/she doesn't understand it and comments stupidly, I get angry and expose it. And if someone does not like the genre, or the fetish, just don't read about it. It's very simple: change the channel and move on.

And IF you are the one that originally trashed my story months ago (I don't know if you are), why would you come back here to read it again? If so, thank-you for "liking" my story.

Isn't that sweet?

Liked it,made me feel i am in the restaurant with them,thanks a lot.

Keep writing! Jack is in for the time of his life!