All Comments on 'Consent Ch. 03-04'

This is great. You have captured Jack's emotion perfectly. That is how I would react. I can clearly see myself in Jack's shoes. Can't wait for the next installment

You wrote and posted chapters 1-4.

You are so clever.

It always baffles me that people take the time to read, then comment on things they dislike, or don't have a fetish for, or don't want to understand.

As with all of your stories, sublocked, this is a great start. Emotion captured well, enough realizism to make it seem like just maybe there is a glimmer of hope this fantasy could be a reality and enough of the extreme to have my mind dance between this seeming perfect and knowing it could never be.

Anxiously awaiting more chapters. 5 stars

could this guy be any more a classic fetishist ? He reads four chapters (probably wearing his bra and satin panties), gets to the end as his willie spurts, then has to decry the story he just spent an hour or so wanking to. Buck up, buttercup. Lick up your sissy cream and admit you cant wait for the next chapter ....

It is an amazing story and it is very accurate emotionally from the slave's side of the coin. Keep up the good work.

Oh my gosh golly gee,how i am so very much jealous as i wish-desire and dream of this being me...,lustfully wanting-jennifur

Ahh, but the Ultimate submission is instead to a Master as this Sissy Boi will learn to be a Complete submissive then he should be transformed into a woman serving a Real Man. There is no Greater submission then to have a Man control and use you for His Pleasure as the best this woman offers is the humiliation and the edge of the fantasy and perversion but to truly submit to another Man, and not just her strapon or used by another slave is not the same as to feel a Real Man inside of her pussy as it rubs against her special spot making her erupt at his whim and pleasure to truly take away his manhood and MAKE him that woman; that receptacle to the Man's seed. Once my DNA is left to soak in and be imprinted my Gurl will forever be Mine. Some Mistress with a strapon can Not do that. I appreciate Mistresses, as they give these sissy bois a good start. On their way to finding a Real Man to make them as their wife and ultimate submissive, as I am their final stop in transition and Ultimate goal. Currently looking for My New Jackie