by sublocked
This is one of the few stories I find myself checking daily to see if more chapters are posted. Keep up the great work!
whether we want to admit it or not, we are all captives of our own demons, be it sexual, money, power or even religious zealotry.
Great insight in this story; please continue
You have it pegged. I can feel and imagine being in jackies place. The emotion the turn on the conflict. I love it please continue.
Starting to think this is your best work yet. Please feed us more.
Just found out today that I have some serious health issues (yes, the "c" word). Chapter 6 is coming, but not for awhile. Sorry. Wish me luck.
Love your writing. Sorry to hear of your cancer. From one survivor of the big C to a soon to be survivor just keep a good sense of humor and you'll get through it all. My best wishes to you.
I'm at avery bit of a crossroad in my life. down one road 'normal' down the other is my fantasy or at least the start of it. This story is giving me the courage to make my fanasy reality. THANK YOU!