by TheKeith
"Your mind and spirit are on a different planet. You're being used and you don't even know it."- Yep. Especially the part about being used. On the other hand, having an immediate threesome was unrealistic. Two stars because of that.
I'm curious to see part 2, her reaction to everything. Your writing definitely gets reactions, kudos to you.
Very unusual. You tried to pack months of information on one page that it just doesn't work out right. Continue the tale. Let's see how this goes...
no rating...yet
As soon as I put the wife on the plane to some shithole in Mexico, where she naturally wanted to go very badly, I stopped on the way home and screwed a blind girl and then an amputee, but I had the good fortune of finding a lesbian dwarf with DD's that wanted to get pregnant! Two years later the wife was rescued from a Mexican whore house and she somehow found me and moved into my new home. I used her for porn and torture porn and she promised endless sex any way I wanted it. I can't wait to see if TheKeith had the same thing happen to him, perhaps minus the big titted lesbian new mother.
Not only is HDK one of the best authors on this site his comments are always first class
i hope you have more coming this is another one of your good tales i like all of your stories keep the good ones coming
Waiting for part 2 . Hope it's very soon. The intro was too short you could have made it at least 3 pages.
I can give firsthand testimony of our skills as lovers. The problem is when you walk into a bar... or a table, or a chair. In my spare time, I help blind people. The verb, of course, not the adjective.
When I come to this genre I mentally prepare myself for another cock story. This is refreshing to say the least. I like it so far. Poor wife needs to get her head examined. Good guys are hard to find. Keep it up TheKeith.
Chrissie
TBC
You've got a good story going here. Can't wait to read Part 2. Ignore the bullshit from the critics in the Loving Wives peanut gallery. Good job!
Absolutely nothing about this story is real.
Nice!
Congrats to the author. He did a good job on this tale.
I enjoyed reading all the way through....and please keep writing more tales like that.....the LW readers desperate need high quality stories like yours.
This was a sex-themed story. For those who still want wall-to-wall ultra-graphic sex on every page, I ask that you get a life. For those who are easily offended because I didn’t write exactly what you wanted to read, I’ll say the same thing. I also observe that the people expressing the worst, nasty, most virulent comments have—with few exceptions—either posted as anonymous or have never published a story under their screen names. Reading such comments is pointless.
That was a little strange. I don't think Mehico is going to work out well for esposa.
1* for self-dealing. I was OK with your story until then. I promise to avoid you in the future.
~Enkidu
I thought it was pretty good myself. At least the MC had some action on the side after the paperwork was done. I don't blame him for getting away asap. Sell it all or give it away.