All Comments on 'Consequences of Teasing Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
You need an editor

So many wrong words that it's hard to focus on the sex.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

OK premise.

Seriously rushed sex.

Needed some extended dialog about what kind/s of D/s each liked.

Did they watch porn? Did they watch D/s porn mostly? Mf? Fm?

Did they masturbate to it? What particularly made them cum?

Two stars.

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