All Comments on 'Consumed Pt. 11'

Another excellent chapter. I really love the closeness between Liam and Rick. Add to the fact that are in tune with what the kids need makes me love them even more. Can't wait for more of this.

I love it... I think it's great

OOO I've been waiting a long time to read the rest of this story, please don't make yourself so scarce...Love the way those two interact and the way Rick cares about the kids...hopfully they'll have a happy ending...

keep'em coming !!

thank you !!!!!!

Thank you thank you thank you!!!! This chapter was great, can't wait for the next one.

At last thank you for this one - the story is progressing nicely and still no real clue of who is guilty with so many suspects. Great work done here and i am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Ralph

Still love the story glad you started again.I like him with Rick better than Jack.

I am so glad you have returned. I love the story so far and am looking forward to reading more.

I'm so glad that you were able to continue this story. I look forward to reading the future chapters.

I am soooooo glad you are continuing this story. It would have been a shame to have it end where it did! Keep up this story and I am glad Liam is with Rick. I have a couple ideas of who the guilty party is: can't wait to see if I am correct!! Glad you are back.

Sooooooooooo glad that you are continuing this story

Did I mention YAY!? I'm so excited that you've decided to continue this story. It's one of the best I've read in a long time. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you, thank you. I was so worried that something had happened to you and selfishly worried that you wouldn't finish your story.

It is wonderful.

Again I am glad you are back, thank you.

J

This broad LOVE NOVEL covers all kinds of devotion splendidly: good sex, friends, lovers, parents, siblings. The suspenseful violence provides a sort of counterpoint. The writing is excellent and character development slow but sure. Thank you! We want more!

Wow, I just read all parts of this story. I couldn`t stop. Its a really entertaining story that has all I´m searching in it. Keep going.

A fantastic story....waiting impatiently for the next chapters. Hope u will post them soon.

This is such a wonderful story. I can't wait until the next chapters are posted which I hope is soon. Keep up the great work!

Gotta know what happens!!! cant wait til your next chapter... this boy is eager! (love your work, keep at it!)

Your stories are always so great and intriguing, I'm seriously addicted! Thank you so much for sharing such fine works. Please come out with the next parts soon!

for the next chapter..i keep checking everyday..this is one of the best stories on the site and one of my favorites so far...i like the progression with rick and liam...hopefully by the end of this they'll be married and have a nice little family there...i thought i knew who the killer was gonna be but now i'm not sure so i can't wait for the future chapters...keep up the great work.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give us more. I really love this story and am sooooo ready for more, I read the whole series in half a day really loving it

I can't wait for the next chapters. This story is more than just a form of entertainment. It also encourages readers in so many ways...

Hope that the following installment won't take that long...

Keep up the realistic plot and take care. We need you to be healthy to continue the story...lol (course not just for this reason of course)

I am dying to know who did it. I have my suspicions, like every one else does I am sure. And now, I have to wait here for the next chapter. I am dying, please don't take too long :-)

And I really love your writing style. Keep up the good work

I'm hooked. And I must say that your writing has improved more and more with each chapter! I can't wait for the next one! Keep them coming!

love this series. please write more. I have my suspicions but want more of the love story too!!

this is a fabulous story is fantastic. Your writing style has improved with each installment. I getso involved in your characters. I am waiting impatiently with all your other fans for more on this fantastic story. Please dont disappoint us!

Will there ever be a next chapter? I really would like to read more.

I have stayed up 'till 2AM reading this story....only to find out that even though it has 11 parts, it's STILL not finished! Oh man!

Thanks for all the effort you have put into this. I've tried writing stories and I have a sense of how much goes into it.

However, I'm still going to needle you for more and soon!!! LOL

i keep on checking all the time for a new chapter. I hope you have not abandoned the story. I truly love it and i wanna know how it all ends up.

I love this story, I have been reading them as u post and am waiting impatiently for the next chapters....but now I have to wonder will there be more chapters or are u done.

would have loved to find out who killed the sister and her husband and is now after the children and what will become of Liam and Rick.

Please continue this story...

myoregon u did promise to finish this story. I love it and I am one of ur many fans waiting impatiently for u to post the next chapterss.

Fantastic writng so far, I check regularly for updates on this story.

This is the seventy-second time I've checked back to see if another chapter has come out. Imagine the smile on my face and the thrill that would go through my body were I to find another chapter here!

I remember I cried when Jourdan Lane took Target down from literotica a few years ago just when it was getting up to the most dramatic part...

I guess, if this one does end here, I'll know never to get attatched to a character in an unfinished story again... But I do have complete confidence that more wonderful chapters will at some stage start appearing.

Just a mention: you "scoff" food, you don't "scarf" it. Also, watch out for "your": "You are" contracts to "you're", not "your" - "your" means "belonging to you". Apart from small errors, your stories are very enjoyable, and your characters are very likable. Thanks for a good read. :-)